We have been learning how to persuade people
in writing and make it so they might agree with
us.
Please click the link to see my speech!
in writing and make it so they might agree with
us.
Please click the link to see my speech!
Wednesday 29 August 2018
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hey Laura,
ReplyDeleteWhat an interesting speech on pollution. It is a horrible thing and I wish that people would do more to care for the environment. It was great to read your writing and I love that you have used a link in your post to make it work.
I Can't wait to read more of your work!
Keep it up!
- Miss Morgan
Hi my name is Chloe King,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the part of your speech when you said that 9 million kilo's of rubbish and 4.2 million people die each year from air pollution.
did you think about when you did your speech that you would get into the final so you wrote good morning tm 1?
why did you highlight it in blue?
Chloe King
Yaldhurst Model School.
hey laura your speech was amazing maybe you can add more details
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